Was the year between books too long? I know I had high expectations going in ~ I dared to believe the excitement I felt at the end of book one would keep escalating but unfortunately, it plateaued or even (yikes) plummeted.
The second book in a trilogy can be like the middle of a really long novel, where it drags and lags and takes work to stay engaged if the author isn't careful. That's exactly what happened in 'The Becoming.' It seemed like I read endless, endless, endless filler material before anything happened. There was some character development, plot points set, etc., but (I can't believe I'm saying this!!!) the novelty of Talamh and especially Breen had tarnished. The place is still fantastical but the action proceeded at the pace of a tortoise. When I can walk back & forth from the cottage, thru the Welcoming Tree, to Nan's house in my sleep ~ there's been too much trivia.
Breen (our heroine) took a slide back into the uninteresting category. Dang, she'd barely crossed over to interesting in 'The Awakening.' Where I thought there'd be "wow" in the development of her magical abilities, there was "hmmmm." So she can light fires with a wave of her hand, ride a dragon, and do a little healing ~ from the daughter of a powerful Taoiseach, I wanted fireworks in the sky. Maybe her human side is just too dominant? The one battle, at the end of the book, she had to be told multiple times to fight before she actually engaged. What????? I can't quit feeling she still wanted to be the insignificant wallflower we were introduced to at the beginning of book one and not the Savior of the Fey we keep being told she actually is.... What is wrong with this picture?? And when is this dichotomy in her personality going to merge into one kick ass woman?? She's only got one more book to make it happen...
As far as that budding romance between Breen and Keegan, there were more sparks with her friend Marco and his love interest (Brian) than there were between the two main characters. It takes halfway thru the book until they get past "hey." Nora, Nora, Nora ~ what's up with that?? Zero tension or chemistry, leaves a girl flat. That is not AT ALL what we want, even from a romance on simmer! Something needs to be kicked up a notch and quick.
Despite the disappointment, I will definitely read the last book when it's published later this year. I expect a crescendo of activity and hopefully a brilliant ending. It would be the only fitting conclusion to a trilogy that started so well...